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7 Tips For A Great “Why This School?” Essay

“Dear Student, why do you want to attend our school?” - Application essay guru, Sharon Epstein talks us through how to answer this question.

This is an important essay; you have to give it time and thought. Why? Because schools want to know that you understand why they’re special and how you'll fit in. Your mission is to tell them. 

7 Tips For Writing A Great “Why This School?” Application Essay

Tip #1 - What is your goal?

Show that you understand what makes this college special and why it's a good fit for you. 

Be specific. Use details and examples. The more specific you are, the more successful your essay will be.

Tip #2 - What schools want to know

Schools want to know that you 'get them'. That means that you understand what makes them different from other schools. Think about academic philosophy, courses, traditions, and student life.

Schools want to know how you’ll fit in. Colleges aren't admitting a bunch of test scores and grades, they are choosing members of their campus community. Think about how you'll contribute and how you'll take advantage of what they have to offer. Tell them why their school matters to you.

Tip #3 - Get excited!

Enthusiasm is contagious. So even if this school isn't your first choice, find out what they offer that matches your interests and get excited about going.

Read the website thoroughly (not just the homepage). Watch videos, connect on Facebook and get regular updates in your newsfeed. Pay attention when you visit and, when something interests you,ask questions.

Visualize yourself as a freshman on campus:What classes are you taking? Why do you love being there? How are you contributing to the campus community? Why are you a good match? Write about it.

Why This School Essay Tips #4 & 5

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Unlike every other aspect of the application, you control your essay. Make sure that the glimpse you give the admission committee into your character, background, and writing ability is the very best possible. Here are seven tips to help you focus and make the most of your application essay.

In our experience, the main worry that applicants have is that their essay won’t stand out. This is a legitimate concern as you will likely compete with numerous applicants who have backgrounds similar to yours. Therefore, follow these tips to ensure that your essay shines in the competitive admissions process.

1. Analyze the prompt thoroughly

Take three minutes to think about the prompt. If needed, divide the prompt into phrases and look at each aspect. Why would the admissions officers ask this prompt? What do you think they want to know? How does that information relate to your ability to excel in college? Next, leave the prompt for a while and then return to it. Do you see something new? 

With so many other things in your schedule, this process can initially seem like a waste of time. However, it will save you a lot of time in the long run. If you later realize that you misread the prompt, you might need to start the writing process from scratch. 

2. Organize your writing

Like the first item, this isn’t something that should take a lot of time. This is another step that can initially seem completely skippable, but organizing your writing can save you considerable stress and frustration. A good writing plan can streamline or even eliminate the need to do any significant rewrites.

Brainstorm your anecdotes. Create a rough outline, including approximately how long each paragraph needs to be in order to complete the essay within the word count limits. Finally, figure out when you’re going to write. A paragraph a day? The whole thing next weekend? Creating a schedule, even if you need to modify it later, gets your brain in motion. 

3. Show instead of telling

When selecting anecdotes for your essay, pick vivid ones that you can tell succinctly. If a story would require 450 words of a 600 word essay, then you’re not going to have a lot of space to express self-reflection and analysis of the situation. Remember that the admissions officers are more interested in your perspective of what happened than the events themselves.

In addition, keep in mind that the admissions officers don’t know you personally, and that’s why they’re reading your essay. They want to get to know you, and the essay is your first introduction. Because of this, don’t tell them that you’re passionate about public service. Show them through strong examples. Help the admissions officers envision each example as if they’re experiencing the situation alongside you. 

4. Know your vocab

Your admissions essay should reflect command of college-level vocabulary. One of the most common mistakes that we see in essays is using advanced vocabulary almost correctly. Even among synonyms, there are shades of meaning. If you’re using a thesaurus, look online for examples of that word in action. Will it still fit into your sentence?

Avoid overdoing it. Advanced vocabulary should be the spice of the essay to give it flavor, so you’ll use plain language most of the time. Essays that are riddled with advanced vocabulary can seem pompous or even inadvertently comical to the reader. 

5. Write succinctly

Can you say what you need to say in fewer words? Can you substitute an advanced vocabulary word for a phrase? Writing concisely expresses to the admissions officers that can organize your thoughts and that you respect their time. 

6. Combine like ideas into more sophisticated sentence structures

The vast majority of the sentences in your essay should be compound, complex, or a combination of both (compound-complex sentences). Save simple sentences for instances when you need to create impact.

7. Seek qualified second opinions

You should absolutely ask others to take a look at your essay before you submit it. As we work on things, we become blind to mistakes that will be glaringly apparent to others. However, limit the number of people you ask to two or three. Asking too many people for feedback will only confuse you and result in a lower quality essay as you revise the essay according to each person’s advice. Therefore, look to individuals who have background and expertise in the college admissions process.

 

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